Starting off my paper, I decided to use a quote that demonstrated, number one: what my main topic was about, Christian Student Fellowship (CSF,) and number two: the purpose of CSF. I did this through a quote that the lead speaker said discussing why all of us college students come together and worship. From there I explained what CSF is, followed by a description of how my experience at the prayer night went. I choose to do it that way because I felt that it was the best way to depict a simple scene with many emotions.
As a peer reviewer, I told Katie to add more description about her past experiences with the AcoUstiKats. Moreover, I also told her to add in her emotions and reactions about the experience she had while sitting in on their practice. Other than that, I felt that she did an amazing job of using the right about of play by play as well as detail!
Peer review was very effective for me because personally I could not think of a way to make my essay longer to meet the word requirement and Katie helped give me ideas on how to add to it. As a professor I feel there is not much more you could have done to make the peer review experience better because it went perfectly well for me. Going hand in hand with that, I feel that Katie and I did a nice job in correcting each other's papers and gave each other great input!
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