Wednesday, February 27, 2013

Interview Plan

My group decided to do our podcast on Resident Assistants on South Campus. I was assigned the job of being an interviewer because I live in Blanding 1, which is located on South Campus. The assigned positions are:
Shawnee: Editor, Host, Group Blogger

Kimberlyn: Scriptwriter, Interviewer
Kristina: Editor, Host
Evan: Interviewer
Me: Interviewer
I have already contacted my RA to get permission to interview. I have already thought of about four questions to ask and the other interviewers have done the same. 
Some of my questions are:
What are the benefits of being an R.A?
What is your least favorite aspect of this position?
Why did you decide to apply for the Resident's Assistant position?
Do you plan to continue being an R.A for another year or advancing in the housing department?

Friday, February 22, 2013

CSF


“May the God of endurance and encouragement grant you to live in such harmony with one another, in accord with Christ Jesus, that together you may with one voice glorify the God and Father of our Lord Jesus Christ.” Theses words were proclaimed from the mouth of Andrea, the leader of Christian Student Fellowship prayer night on Thursday night. The air in the room wasn’t cold, although chills all over my body had grown. The way everyone was so engaged in the opening reading was moving.


Christian Student Fellowship (CSF) is a non-denominational campus ministry on the University of Kentucky’s campus. Although Christian Student Fellowship has a building located on Woodland Avenue, CSF is everywhere on campus. Recent graduates of University of Kentucky, who give their first year or two after graduation giving back to the University of Kentucky community lead bible studies, lectures, or volunteer activities, mainly staff CSF.  Christian Student Fellowship organizes over 150 unique events throughout the school year for enrolled members of CSF as well as students who have no affiliation with the organization. By undertaking these fun activities, the leaders and members of Christian Student Fellowship have the hope of familiarizing their organization to students and draw them closer to God and spreading His word. People like you and me who donate their time and money allow this organization to flourish on the campus at Kentucky support CSF.
Upon my entrance to the Christian Student Fellowship building, I was greeted with warm welcoming faces. I entered with my friend and sister of my sorority, Chi Omega, who has been an active member of CSF since the beginning of the year. Many people knew Bitty. Immediately she introduced me to all of her friends. Being so overwhelmed with names, none had stuck in my brain. Everyone was so overjoyed that she was bringing a new member to the “family.” Walking further into the main room of the building, I was floored to at the amount of people in attendance. Just for this one worship there were around 400 students gathered together. Taking up one of this plethora of chairs in the main room of the Christian Student Fellowship building, the socialization was at a maximum. We set our bags down and talked to the people around us. It seemed to me that seats were not assigned the same for every prayer night because Bitty introduced herself to the people behind us. To say that people were friendly here was an understatement. All of the foldable chairs were facing the main front stage, containing a giant speaker, microphone stand, and three people who would later lead the prayer night. I was calming down from the overwhelmed feeling I felt at the beginning of the night being introduced to what seemed hundreds of people. I was beginning to enjoy myself and realized what I had been missing out on.


While looking around and taking in the scenery, I noticed that although this was a religious function, church attire was not a necessity. Many girls were wearing yoga pants and sweatshirts, while the men were dressed in khakis or jeans and a t-shirt or sweatshirt. Furthermore, while unintentionally eavesdropping on the group of girls sitting behind me I heard them discussing their weekend saying “the party was so f***ing crowded!” the blonde said in a raised voice. I was a little taken back by the vulgarity of this sentence, although thinking twice about it, even though theses people are at a bible study, they are still college students.
 In high school I was apart of a club similar to Christian Student Fellowship called Fellowship of Christian Athletes (FCA.) I had also attended church bible studies for 17 years of my life at the church I attended every Sunday. Comparing all three I would say that Christian Student Fellowship is smack dab in the middle of the formal scale while my church bible study in the front-runner. Although, out of all the bible studies I have attended, I feel CSF was the most informative and useful.
 “Attention please while we get started!!!!” leader number one spoke loudly into the microphone to catch the attention of the large crowd. Finally after a few seconds, the room grew to a silence. Beginning by introducing herself, Andrea, the head leader of Christian Student Fellowship prayer night began. Andrea looked to be about mid-twenties and she enlightened the crowed that she had just graduated from University of Kentucky this past fall semester. Unlike the audience’s attire, Andrea was dressed in a more formal way, wearing black dress pants and a bright colored blouse. Looking back on prayer night, Andrea was the most outgoing of the three prayer leaders that night. I asked Bitty if there were the same presenter every night and I was surprised to hear that almost every week there is a different group of people presenting to the members of CSF. I was lucky enough to attend the prayer night with the head leaders. To begin the night Andrea spoke about the importance of coming together to worship the Lord Jesus Christ. Following the typical introduction of thanking everyone for coming out, the topic of conversation was love. This was fitting considering it was Valentines Day.
One of the most prominent things I observed while attending this prayer night with Christian Student Fellowship was the attention given to the speaker. Nowadays it is very common to see young adults and teens preoccupied with their phone while someone is speaking. While looking around, out of the huge crowd I spotted only one person looking down at their phone. The fact that these students wanted to be there and learn about God’s word was just an amazing and inspirational feeling. One of the things I found to be awesome about the way that Andrea prepared her part of the night was that everything she said was so relatable. Everyone has had their fair share of relationships and heartbreaks and the way that Andrea connected these relationships to the relationship that everyone should hold with God was a great way to relay God’s word to college students.
The next speaker, Wes, was next on stage. His main topic was a little different than Andrea’s although following the same main topic of love. People seemed a little more energized for Wes to speak. As I looked around the two girls and boys who sat in front of me scooted to the front of their seats in anticipation to listen to what Wes had coming next. Wes looked a bit older than Andrea with full-grown bread and dress in casual clothing: a t-shirt from a mission trip in 2008 and khaki pants. Maybe people felt so compelled to listen to him because he seemed to be more relatable and less formal than the first speaker. With a big smile on his face welcoming all who came out for prayer night tonight, Wes encouraged us to take a couple minutes and meet the people sitting around us. As we were doing so, a screen to the side of the stage lit up as a projector projected lyrics to a song onto the huge white screen. A loud burst of music sounded from the back right side of me causing everyone to stop their socializing and pay attention. The whole prayer night audience began to joyfully sing the words of the song that was being displayed and lead by Wes while he strummed a guitar on stage leading the song. Following the song, Wes gave a similar speech as Andrea only talked about loving yourself rather than Andrea’s stance on loving one another. I feel like more people related to Wes’s talk in the sense that everyone knows how important and difficult it can be to love yourself. Using stories rather than a lecture, I feel there was more to take from this talk. Before closing with a song, Wes had everyone take out their planners or phones and go to the day of the week that is most difficult for you personally and had us write “Smile and love yourself!” on that day.

Last but not least Brian came on stage. Dressed in a flannel button down, his goal was to show us how Jesus Christ is present in all of our lives. He was the more traditional speaker I was used to. Brian read verses out of the bible and then picked them apart, making them relatable to college students. This is how I would have described my hometown church prayer night. Although it wasn’t as exciting everything was still hitting home. Just hitting the hour mark in the prayer night, I observed the audience once again. This time people I could spot many more people checking their cell phones and not being as attentive. Although there were more than before, it was not a very noticeable amount. While Brian was coming to a close, Andrea and Wes came up on stage and everyone applauded all of the speakers in prayer night. I was shocked to see that everyone around me gave them a standing ovation. This really demonstrated how well these three speakers did on presenting the way love was and should be present in all of our lives.
When prayer night concluded, everyone picked up their foldable chairs and took them to the back. It seemed as though this was a ritual after every meeting CSF has because it was done without any direction. Due to the large amount of people in attendance, a line was formed to place put the folding chairs away. Once again I was introduced to an overwhelming amount of Bitty’s friends. Following clean up, Bitty and I filed out while there were a few circles of people socializing in the main room.
Being in college I can sometimes find “more important” things to do or other excuses to skip weekly mass. Christian Student Fellowship really gave me a reason to WANT to go to weekly services and continue to grow closer in faith. I am very thankful for this project and how it forced me to become a part of something I really wanted to be a part of, just did not have the motivation. 

Wednesday, February 20, 2013

Peer Review Feedback

Starting off my paper, I decided to use a quote that demonstrated, number one: what my main topic was about, Christian Student Fellowship (CSF,) and number two: the purpose of CSF. I did this through a quote that the lead speaker said discussing why all of us college students come together and worship. From there I explained what CSF is, followed by a description of how my experience at the prayer night went. I choose to do it that way because I felt that it was the best way to depict a simple scene with many emotions.

As a peer reviewer, I told Katie to add more description about her past experiences with the AcoUstiKats. Moreover, I also told her to add in her emotions and reactions about the experience she had while sitting in on their practice. Other than that, I felt that she did an amazing job of using the right about of play by play as well as detail!

Peer review was very effective for me because personally I could not think of a way to make my essay longer to meet the word requirement and Katie helped give me ideas on how to add to it. As a professor I feel there is not much more you could have done to make the peer review experience better because it went perfectly well for me. Going hand in hand with that, I feel that Katie and I did a nice job in correcting each other's papers and gave each other great input!

Sunday, February 17, 2013

Peer Review

Peer reviewing is a great and essential way of editing an essay or paper. I feel that the goal of this is to have an outside opinion of how well or poorly a paper is written. While writing a paper it is not uncommon to get ahead of yourself and skip out essential points to help the reader follow. Not only is it helpful for the editing the structure, but also for grammar mistakes. Personally, I would not true in a paper without having it peer reviewed by at least one other person. As a writer, most of my mistakes will be found in my punctuation, therefore the most helpful feedback is editing my punctuation and fragment choices. As a peer reviewer, I feel that time is the most important thing I need. It is important to me because while trying to really edit someones paper I hate feeling rushed. If I am feeling rushed I will not edit to the best of my ability. I feel as though the time that should be allotted for peer review depends on the length of the paper, but usually 20-30 minutes will suffice. I prefer to be in larger groups while editing so that more than one other person can edit my essay. Furthermore, I feel that picking my own editing group is more beneficial because I will feel more comfortable with giving in depth corrections as well as feel comfortable asking questions regarding the main points. Overall, I think that peer reviewing is a extremely beneficial element of writing a paper before turning it in for a final grade.

Wednesday, February 13, 2013

Scene Depiction

The scene I chose to depict for this assignment is a scene from the movie "P.S. I Love You." This scene is towards the beginning of the movie, at the funeral of Holly's husband, Jerry. The first thing you will notice is the location of the funeral, a bar. Moreover, I noticed the black attire of everyone attending. One might think that it is normal to wear black to a funeral although I find this a little strange because everyone is dress formally and appropriately for a funeral...at a bar. During the first minute of the scene there is soft music playing in the background. The music sounds to be irish music, which can connect the dots of why they are at a bar due to the stereotype that Irishmen drink a lot. Continuing on the focus of music, when the priest begins to speak the background music is turned off. This can be assumed because after the priest's few short words, Jerry's favorite song plays. While the song is playing, people are going up to pay their respects by taking shots of whiskey. While they're taking these shots, the mood in the song changes to a more vulgar and fun mood. By not even knowing Jerry, his personality is coming to life. Another interesting aspect from the scene is when the priest joins along in the vulgar part of Jerry's favorite song. One can also tell that this song describes Jerry's personality because as the vulgar part of the song begins, Holly breaks down into tears. Before this part, Holly seems to keep great composure in accepting the fact that her husband has passed away.

Monday, February 11, 2013

Ethnography

I have decided to do my research on Christian Student Fellowship (CSF). I am choosing to do my research on this organization because being a busy college student, I find myself to be less involved with my religion than I used to be and as much as I would like to be. In high school, I was a member of a similar organization named Fellowship of Christian Athletes (FCA). I feel as though by researching CSF I will enjoy the atmosphere and become an involved Christian once again.
My first plan of action is to contact CSF. A girl in Chi Omega with me, Bitty Ach, is a very involved member. I figured I would start off speaking to her about it and then from there, attend meetings, talk to leaders, etc. CSF has different types of meetings every night of the week. I decided that for my research I will attend a few different nights and decide on which talks I like best and would like to discuss in my paper. I haven't yet asked if I can take pictures although I assume it is okay considering friends I have already involved in CSF have pictures during their weekly meetings.
Throughout this research project I hope to learn and grow closer in my faith to God.

Wednesday, February 6, 2013

Speech Analysis


Watching myself give a presentation was a first for me. Throughout high school and even first semester, I have given many speeches, but never reviewed them. Truthfully, immediately after giving my speech, I felt that was one of the better speeches I have given. After reviewing my grade and being a little unhappy with the outcome I watched the video of my presentation to see some flaws I had during my presentation. Some things I noticed that I should work on for the next and future speeches are as followed:
1.     Beginning my speech, I was a little dependent on my notecards. Looking at my notecards the very beginning of a presentation is never a good first impression on the audience.
2.     My stance was awkward. I have found myself to cross my legs during times of stress. I feel as though by a slow pace or movement I will not feel the need to stand cross-legged during presentations.
3.     As stated in my rubric, I had a bit of a monotone throughout the speech. Even a little pep during the stories I told would have given a better reflection on how these stories impacted my life and were worthy enough to tell the class.
4.     Going hand-in-hand with my tone of voice, were my hand movements. There was little to no natural hand movements given during my speech. I feel that the more I present to the class, the more comfortable I will feel and with that, natural hand movements will occur.
5.     I repeatedly said the word “um.” Obviously I did not notice myself saying this while presenting but the more I practice, the flow of the speech will be better and less awkward pauses for “um” to happen.

Although there were things that I could improve on I felt that my volume and overall assignment to present to the class were well done.